orpheneritus ([info]orpheneritus) wrote in [info]fic_on_demand,

FIC: Crumbs in the Bedsheets (GW, 1x2x1, [info]mookiegatto)

Title: Crumbs in the Bedsheets
Author: [info]orpheneritus
Fandom: GW
Pairing: 1x2x1
Rating: G
Request: GW Request
Warnings: None



He eats on the bed. Without a plate.

You find him in the evening, sprawled out on the bed with the laptop, eating peanut butter on toast. Without a plate.

Each crumb that hits the bedspread rebounds and rolls, he’s oblivious to the mess. You sooth your irritation, until it is a small twitch in your fingers.

You hang up your coat and leave your briefcase in the bottom of the hall closet. On your way back to the bedroom, you grab a plate from the kitchen.

Sliding the plate under the hand holding the toast, you sit down beside him on the bed.

‘Hey, Heero… thanks,’ he smiles at you, dropping the toast onto the plate. He slides the laptop over and rolls onto his back. ‘How’s work?’

‘I picked up a new client… X-com.’

It’s a routine you’ve fallen into with him. He asks about your day, you tell him something, then he’ll tell you about his day.

Duo’s days are always more interesting. It usually starts with… ‘Then Harris blew the generator on the gas turbine, it set us back nearly two days, but it was worth it just to see the look on Gibbon’s face. Should’ve been there Heero, red as a beet, sweat pulsing from his temples… poor kid, felt sorry for him.’

As he lay on his back recounting the days disaster one arm fails dramatically with the story line while the other rests warmly on your thigh.

‘Why the laptop,’ you ask, kicking off your shoes and sliding onto the bed beside him.

‘Ah,’ his lips purse together. ‘Something’s up with the desktop… thought I’d leave it to you.’ He elbows you with a grin.

You nod with a small smile. Even though Duo is more than capable, you like to fix the computers. You yelled at him once, for fixing the computer. Only a few weeks after you moved in together.

He understood.

You had to try harder to understand the little things. Not to organise his papers or straighten the garage…

You pick up the toast from the plate and take a big bite, ignoring the crumbs that fall and scatter across the bedding...

You kiss him every night. Tonight you are sure it will be for all nights to come.

Tags: fic, gundam wing

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[info]nataliethompson

February 8 2005, 21:07:30 UTC 7 years ago

Awww...I liked it. It was adorable in a non-lovey dovey 'i can't live without him' sort of way. Good job!

[info]orpheneritus

February 9 2005, 04:29:06 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks ^^

Lovey dovey, give me hives. I'm indulging my occasional passion for second person present tense.

Anonymous

February 9 2005, 04:56:41 UTC 7 years ago

Nice

I take back the choose your own adventure comment....

[info]orpheneritus

February 9 2005, 07:25:25 UTC 7 years ago

Re: Nice

:p So you should, Rochelle.

[info]infini_t

February 9 2005, 04:57:43 UTC 7 years ago

I like it a lot. It has a quiet tone to it and yet doesn't miss anything. Lovely way of showing the relationship...Makes me smile..^^

[info]orpheneritus

February 9 2005, 07:25:48 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks. I'm glad you like it.

[info]mookiegatto

March 2 2005, 23:25:52 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks for taking a look at my list of uber demanding conditions and writing a response to my request. Although I would have preferred to see something that didn't have office-job-Heero and shades of fanon Duo, you captured the epiphany I was looking for.

You kiss him every night. Tonight you are sure it will be for all nights to come.

It's a lovely sentiment and as you said in your response to my request, it is in the insignificant things where the significant realizations are made.

[info]orpheneritus

March 3 2005, 07:14:25 UTC 7 years ago

I'm glad you liked the epiphany. Maybe one day I'll have another crack at it.

With a longer story there would be more opportuninty to push past those sterotypes.
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