[situation] Bane-Smith and Neo have a conversation on the Hammer. I like ConfusedEvasive!Bane-Smith as he tries to adapt to having normal conversations and not be too extremely obvious about who he is (and failing miserably, but oh well...). I also would prefer it if Neo wasn't too much of an idiot in the fic...be fair about his characterization.
Oh, by the way...this is slaygirl. This is my writing journal that I'm going to be using from now on when it comes to fics.